Elaine

Uh well um, I felt that the writing lacked certain emotion and intensity.

Lippman

Ah, (reads an excerpt) 'It was damp and chilly afternoon, so I decided to put on my sweatshirt!'

Elaine

Right, well...

Lippman

You put exclamation point after sweatshirt?

Elaine

That's that's correct, I-I felt that the character doesn't like to be ch-ch-chilly...